I liked this one "My desire for you to be whole is greater than my need for us to be together". being together wouldn't feel right if you weren't whole anyway
something about this one didn't connect for me, for reasons that are interesting to explore "and don't give a damn"
Thanks, JJF. I appreciate knowing which lines resonate and which ones don't :) Yeah, maybe it needs an end that line: "don't give a damn...about XYZ" because I agree that they DO give a damn just not about the litle things or the things they're told as woman they SHOULD care about :)
I liked this one "My desire for you to be whole is greater than my need for us to be together". being together wouldn't feel right if you weren't whole anyway
something about this one didn't connect for me, for reasons that are interesting to explore "and don't give a damn"
Thanks, JJF. I appreciate knowing which lines resonate and which ones don't :) Yeah, maybe it needs an end that line: "don't give a damn...about XYZ" because I agree that they DO give a damn just not about the litle things or the things they're told as woman they SHOULD care about :)
Ditto